To be Titled... Feedback

[Marie]

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[cyberologist]

No apology needed here,

just glad you're back and OK. I was wondering how you are...I'm new but I read a lot ...I am interested in reading more of your new story. I read everything ;D
...Also

I keep thinking with all this talent we have out here I've been reading awesome stories there has to be a way to get our authors published to make a buck: I've even got lofty ideas of starting some kind of publishing venue or something for us...but just saying...

Just in case you never know...here is a publishing house looking for authors,

Tease Publishing is a small press print publisher committed to the careers of their authors. While they do put out E books, Print is the focus of Tease, and because of this, Tease is a closed submissions publisher nine months out of the year. Submissions open for specific publisher wanted genre's in July and close at the end of September each year for Tease Publishing.


We are looking for Mature Novels 70-100k ONLY.

Genres Defined:

How to submit:

Step 1: QUERY
A query letter should include the following information:
1. The name
2. length
3. type (genre) of book you are sending.
4. What your book is about.
5. Your qualifications, if any, to write the book.
6. Your name, address, telephone number, website, and e-mail
Include the hook, synopsis (not more then 5 pages), marketing plan (Both electronic and print plans), and your biography.

www.teasepublishingllc.com/submissions.html

Oops LIKE THE STORY
consider "Far from Reality" for your title
I wub this title and it sort of fits so far.

Also your line "Turns out his dreams for the didn't include her. "
Turns out his dreams for the "future" didn't include her
or maybe....

Turns out his dreams didn't include her